My First Photos

I don't like this photo. The coloring is very dull and the action looks fake. I was trying to do framing, but that did not really work and it was not straight. 

I like this photo because it is in focus on the left and then gradually blurs out to the right. I think the lighting in this photo is good, and it is evenly lit. The lines from the lockers make it look as if it goes on forever.